Brown's Jerusalem (Original).mp3
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Alyson
From United Kingdom
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| Joined on Apr. 7 2008 |
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""In a perfect world we'd all sing in tune, but this is reality so give me some room!""
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Really moving song. I liked it very much. Don't worry you aren't the only one who is disillusioned! chris
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on Jul. 21 2008 |
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| Wow Alison, this is original!!!! You impressed me very much with this song!!!! It’s very beautiful song and this is really most enjoyable to listen!!!! Great done my dear!!!!! It sound also very good, the mix is more than good!!!! Great done!!!!!! |
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on Jun. 25 2008 |
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You are a very talented girl Alyson & I'm darn proud to know you & that lovely voice of yours! This was a beautiful piece that I most enjoyed listening to! Bravo!     |
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on Jun. 24 2008 |
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| As always alyson great song nice voice, wonderfull, great,greatest! |
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on Jun. 22 2008 |
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i really enjoyed your sweet voice, i liked your song and i loved your voice , well done  |
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on Jun. 22 2008 |
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I love Jerusalem, it's very inspiring so it's a very clever idea to take it and use it to spread a very different kind of message about Britain. It's the kind of thing those satirical puppets of Spittin' Image used to do, isn't it? The singing and the mix were very good although I struggled to hear all the words properly which is a pity. As for the lyrics well I can understand where you are coming from, I'm a working class lad from Liverpool after all! I just found it a little pessimistic for my taste. You mentioned that there are a few bad apples and that is really what it amounts to. I find that it's the majority complaining about the minority in this country. I would have liked you to have added a last verse rallying that majority into action..... reclaiming the night for instance, becoming better neighbours, giving up on the pursuit of the material and concentrating a little more on the spiritual side of life. Still, it is a fine piece of work that you should be rightly proud of hun. Well done!  xx |
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on Jun. 22 2008 |
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| Oops, yes Alie I see what you mean! I've altered the description now. I wouldn't want to mislead anyone. Just to clarify, I wrote the words and made the backing track myself, based on an existing tune! |
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on Jun. 20 2008 |
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hi alyson,this is a wonderful song , although i think it's a little confusing when you say it's an own composition (made me think you had written the music), while it's an existing psalm. however the lyrics you made are beautiful. enjoyed my listening very much.have a wonderful weekend.  , alie |
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on Jun. 19 2008 |
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HI AL,WOW, SOME POWERFUL SONG!! YOU HAVE SO MUCH FEELING ANDEMOTIONS. THIS WAS VERY WELL WRITTEN.IT'S REALLY SAD  .IT SOUNDS LIKE IS A LACK OF HOPE, AND THE PEOPLE ARESUFFEREING FROM FEELINGS OF HOPELESSNESS, AND SPIRITUALLY TOO.YOU DID A WONDERFUL JOB AL, MY SIS...THANKS FOR SHARING THIS.I LOVE YOU, AND LOTS OS HUGS  GOD BLESS YOU !!! LOVE, DI |
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